Stifling Discipline in Creative Writing

While I was growing up (and it remains a matter of debate whether I ever did) much was made about the dangers of ‘stifling a child’s creativity’. Everyone in popular culture seemed preoccupied with the idea that telling a brat that he was being a brat and that should choose to stop being a brat before someone made sure that he stopped being a brat would somehow permanently damage them. How could they be writing the great American Novel write music for the ages or craft plays, painting, films or other works of art later in their life if they were creatively stifled? Of course, one might argue that such bruising may have been the origin of writing a number of tell-all biographies later in life, but that was beside the point. So in order to avoid this stifling, an entire range of permissive parenting was wheeled out that would, it was argued, allow the child to ‘explore without fear’ and ‘get in touch with their inner creative self without have artificial constraints (a.k.a. parenting) to slow them down.

Now, it seems, we must slow down these unrestrained creative children with Ritalin. We have in our desire to ‘free’ our children raise a generation whose understanding of discipline has been completely stifled. We have a generation who were taught that they were ‘special’ and ‘unique’ but who lack any of the discipline required to translate those elements into anything meaningful and lasting.

Writing by the ‘Special’

I often have new writers in our writing workshops who, after examining our structural segments on story plot and character relationships tell me something like, “well, that’s fine for those OTHER writers. But I’m different! My imagination is too creative, to unique, and too special to fit inside the constraints of such mundane rules!” Whenever I encounter such people I realize that they are almost certainly enormously creative and most likely talented as well (those elements having not been stifled previously) but who have been completely stifled in discipline. I imagine them having managed to ‘slide by’ their parents or their grade-school teachers based on the brightness of their smile and the ‘cleverness’ of them. They now believe that they can continue that trend by writing from their talent alone. They are, in their view, above the rules and discipline.

These are also those who’s stifled discipline insures that they will never develop the craft to execute consistent art over time. They might have a ‘one hit wonder’ in the same sense that a meteorite might hit the manhole cover outside my house — but they will spend most of their lives dreaming of the incredible books they never wrote or the wonderful plays they never performed or the fabulous music they never wrote or played. Such people make wonderful readers of the writing others produce but mistake their love of reading for the ability to write. It’s creatively easy to enjoy a world-class violinist. It’s much hard to play world-class violin.

Writing is Talent, Craft and Discipline

My father once approached an artist in a museum in Paris. This man was cleaning his brushes after having painted a copy of one of the Great Masters paintings. The reproduction was amazingly exact. My father asked the artist why he had not made any changes to the copy he had just painted or tried something new of his own. The Artist replied that he needed to learn the craft and technique of those who had preceded him so that he would know the rules they had discovered before he tried to make new rules of his own.

Perhaps there are new writers out there who will break the rules in new and wondrous ways but you have to understand the rules before you can break them. It does not ‘stifle’ an architect’s creativity to understand the laws of physics, load and stress — but it does make for buildings that do not fall down before they are built.

In our writing workshops we teach the ‘foundations of story’ and the ‘physics of character relativity’. We deal with the fundamental structure of plot and how it relates to character function in the story. The craft of writing is not just about being creative; it is about translating that creativity in to writing that can be shared consistently with an audience and have meaning again and again.

Writing requires discipline … so don’t stifle it!

We Sing the Ideal

Laura and I have been watching the ABC television series ‘Once Upon a Time‘ here in the United States. It is about an Evil Queen in a fantasy world filled with fairytale characters all of whom she curses with the most terrible of magical spells … condemning them to live their lives in our reality and not remembering their true, better selves.

It is, indeed, a terrible curse.

The conflict between what we desire — our fantasies — and what we perceive as real has been a long standing one. Recently, Laura and I watched the traditional holiday movie ‘Miracle on 34th Street.’ Avoid the modern version, the only true Santa Claus is found in the 1947 version with Edmund Gwenn, Maureen O’Hara, John, Payne and the perfect Natalie Wood. The curse is found here, too, in Maureen O’Hara’s character of Doris Walker when she addresses John Payne’s Fred Gailey on the subject.

WALKER: But I think there is harm. I tell her Santa Claus is a myth, you bring her here… and she sees hundreds of gullible children… meets a very convincing old man with real whiskers. This sets up a very harmful mental conflict within her. What is she going to think? Who is she going to believe? And by filling them full of fairy tales… they grow up considering life a fantasy instead of a reality. They keep waiting for Prince Charming to come along. And when he does, he turns out to be a…

GAILEY: We were talking about Suzie, not about you.

Mrs. Walker is condemned to live her life within the confines of her own perception of reality … and only comes alive when she takes off these blinders and considers being open to something more and find hope once more.

As a writer, I’ve come to believe that there are there is apparent truth and desired truth. Reality, I believe, is found in both but not fully explored or understood by either.

We think of apparent truth as reality but what is apparent isn’t always real. It was apparently true to the ancients that the world was flat. Science has down through the ages changed its perspective, broadened its understanding of the universe and, with each new perspective, the apparent truth of yesterday is replaced by the apparent truth of today. Reality has not been altered but our perspective on it has changed. Consider that science, in order to progress beyond our current understanding, must accept that it does not yet have a complete perspective on reality — and so our apparent truth of today is incomplete. ‘Here be dragons’ continues to lurk beyond our apparent understanding.

Desired truth is not just a wish … it is a hope for a reality that is better than the one which is apparent. Desired truth acknowledges that there is an ideal to be achieved beyond the imperfect trappings of our perceived reality.

Some men see things as they are and say why – I dream things that never were and say why not.

– George Bernard Shaw

A friend of mine was speaking a few days ago about our church hymns. He said, “We don’t sing about what’s real … we sing the ideal.” That thought has stayed with me these last few days. We are coming into the holiday season with a day of Thanksgiving and the many religious holiday celebrations in December. It has made me reflect on the purpose I have in writing.

There are many, I know, who believe that our literature should be about the reality — I would say ‘apparent truth’ — of our existence and should reflect who we are in honest examination. I believe that is only partially true; we should examine the apparent truth of our lives but we must do more than just wallow in our sorrows, inhumanity to man or the bleakness of troubled economic times. I believe that the real value in the written word comes not in our apparent truth but in our desired truth — in telling us not who we are but who we can become.

One of my favorite poems is by Robert Frost written in 1947. It’s called ‘Choose Something Like a Star’ and it is about our desire to understand and how we are inspired to rise above ourselves.

O Star (the fairest one in sight),
We grant your loftiness the right
To some obscurity of cloud –
It will not do to say of night,
Since dark is what brings out your light.
Some mystery becomes the proud.
But to be wholly taciturn
In your reserve is not allowed.

Say something to us we can learn
By heart and when alone repeat.
Say something! And it says “I burn.”
But say with what degree of heat.
Talk Fahrenheit, talk Centigrade.
Use language we can comprehend.
Tell us what elements you blend.
It gives us strangely little aid,
But does tell something in the end.

And steadfast as Keats’ Eremite,
Not even stooping from its sphere,
It asks a little of us here.
It asks of us a certain height,
So when at times the mob is swayed
To carry praise or blame too far,
We may choose something like a star
To stay our minds on and be staid.

Story, as Joseph Campbell saw it, exists not so much to tell us who we are as to show us who we should be.

We may write what is real … but when we do, let us be sure to sing the ideal.

Frankenjacked Books in Purgatory

In “Spam clogging Amazon’s Kindle self-publishing”–a Reuters article out of San Francisco– Alistair Barr says, “Spam has hit the Kindle, clogging the online bookstore of the top-selling eReader with material that is far from being book worthy and threatening to undermine Amazon.com Inc’s publishing foray.”

According to the article, rather than actually go to the bother and work of writing a book, these b-spammers ‘assemble’ the text by simply copying other people’s work, pushing a button and publishing it online as what passes for an ebook. My wife calls this ‘frankenjacking’ — like assembling a monster by jacking all the parts that you don’t own, claiming it’s a living book and then selling it when you have no ownership at all in the text.

As we have often said before, traditional publishing used to be the arbiter of quality. They took care of tossing such atrocities as a ‘frankenjacked’ book out on its ear before it ever went before the public eye. But now, with self-publishing at such places as Amazon.com, Barnes & Noble and Smashwords, the proliferation of these frankenjacked texts has taken on many aspects of a zombie invasion.

In 2010, almost 2.8 million nontraditional books, including ebooks, were published in the United States, while just more than 316,000 traditional books came out. That compares with 1.33 million nontraditional books and 302,000 conventional books in 2009, according to Albert Greco, a publishing-industry expert at Fordham University’s business school.

In 2002, fewer than 33,000 nontraditional books were published, while over 215,000 traditional books came out in the United States, Greco noted.

Hooray for self-publishing, unless most of these books are frankenjacks because this means that your legitimate book that you have labored over for years to get right and to tell a story that is meaningful is now buried under an ocean of these zombie monstrosities that exist only to cheat some poor, misguided living soul into paying them for dead words that the B-spammer never wrote in the first place.

Some of these books appear to be outright copies of other work. Earlier this year, Shayne Parkinson, a New Zealander who writes historical novels, discovered her debut “Sentence of Marriage” was on sale on Amazon under another author’s name.

Ebay had a similar problem some time back with their antique and collectables category. People were posting items to these categories all the time that had no legitimate right to be called either ‘antique’ or ‘collectable.’ Ebay cracked down — and a lot of people complained at first — but they established a relatively self-regulating reporting system where people could complain about listings that were not legitimately antique or collectable. These items were immediately ‘moved’ out of these prestige areas.

Amazon.com, Barnes & Noble.com and Smashwords.com all need to move to a similar system. I believe all these providers need to step up and become legitimate publishers in the sense of arbitrating the quality of their product or, at a minimum, differentiating for the public between legitimate authorship and b-spammer frankenjacked texts. New publishers on these providers should have their royalties withheld for a period of time while the legitimacy of their texts is evaluated by the readers themselves — who should be able to mark works both of questionable quality and dubious ownership. Publishers should be vetted more than they are at least so that the public can know whether a book is by someone who had demonstrated legitimate authorship as opposed to a b-spammer. My wife suggests that all books which are self-published be at least required to provide a Library of Congress Catalog number … easily obtained by legitimate authors.

Frankenjacked books — when discovered for the lifeless zombies that they are — should at the very least be consigned to the ebook equivalent of purgatory, far from the front sales pages of Amazon.com and never presented as being legitimate.

Frankenjacked books represent a real danger to the newborn ebook industry — trying to choke the life out of legitimate publications by quick, let’s make a buck theft. Such monstrosities need to be sent to the regions of the internet that most resemble hell.

Forget About Being Published

One of the great advantages of going to conferences and workshops is that, if you’re lucky, they blow your mind away.

Caped CONduit 21 just ended, and it was incredible. CONduit isn’t a writing conference, it’s a SF and F general convention. But I learned just as much about writing and story as if it had been a conference designed for writers.

Tracy Hickman said something that took my world, spun it upside down and turned it inside out. He said, “Don’t seek to be published, seek to be read.”

Don’t seek to be published, seek to be read.

So simple, and it makes so much sense when you think about it. With advances in technology, anyone with a computer and Internet connection can be published. You might say that it’s never been easier to be published than it is now, and I think it’s only going to get easier.

That means there’s going to be a lot of noise out there. And being heard and noticed is going to be a lot harder and take a little more creativity to achieve.

So many times we writers tend to focus on the wrong things, and getting published is one of those. I’m not putting down the notion of publishing. I seek to be published, and I think it’s a great thing–but it should not be the limit of our dreams. Sometimes our vision isn’t large enough, and that limits us. We cage ourselves in our own expectations simply because we never think to look up.

The thing about dreams is they’re meant to be large. When you sit down at the table of dreams, forget about taking small servings, never snatching the last roll, or taking tiny bites of the pie. Forget about which silverware everyone else is using, and just dig in. Dreams are only as finite as we make them. Daring to dream big doesn’t mean there will be less dream for the next person on your left, so don’t cheat yourself by taming your dreams. Realistically, you’re going to have to work hard–but that’s the reality of dreams.

So, if being published isn’t what we should be aiming for, what then? I believe the ultimate goal (besides being true to yourself) should be writing something that’s worth reading. Something that speaks to people loudly enough, deeply enough, that your words reach out of the page and drown your reader in a sea of thought and perception that they become a part of. Something that will keep them coming back over and over and over again.

Being published is great, being read is better.

I don’t believe that any of us seek to write into a void. We have something important to say, a story to tell. We want readers.

So how do we get them?

It’s all about writing something that’s worth being read. That means learning what Story means. How it’s shaped and structured and why. I’m not a fan of all the writing rules floating around out there. I think they’re good guidelines, but they can also clip your story’s wings if your story needs to be something else. However, if you want to break the rules effectively, you need to know them in the first place. And I mean know–not be aware of or know about–you need to know them. Recognize them. Understand them.

And there are some guidelines I don’t think should be broken. Story structure is one of them. If the foundations of the story aren’t put together right, the reader’s going to feel it. They may not be able to pinpoint exactly why, but they will feel the lack and it may be enough of a lack for that reader to never come back. Story structure is the bones of the story, it isn’t the writing. Characters are the heart. They aren’t the writing either. Themes and ideas are the muscle. And we still haven’t hit the actual words yet.

Words are the flesh and grammar is the tendons. And yet, I’d wager that the words and grammar are around 90% of what writers focus on. Look at the “rules”, we’ve all heard them. They’re even called writing rules. Now, this isn’t to say the rules are bad. They’re not. It’s important to know when to show and when to tell. It’s important to engage the reader with tight, clean prose.

But if your skeleton’s broken, if your heart’s not beating, if your muscles are thin and underdeveloped, will it really matter if you’ve got acne or tendonitis?

Most of writing well has nothing to do with the actual writing. This is a mistake I know I’ve made, and one I’m going to work very hard to not make again. Because I don’t just want my name in print. I don’t want to just have my books on shelves in bookstores. I don’t want to just be able to say that I’m published. That’s too small a dream.

And even being widely read isn’t quite enough for me.

I want to take a reader by the heart and soul and never let them walk away from my stories as the person who opened the cover for the first time or the hundredth time.

Our dreams should give us wings that allow us to fly past the stars. So don’t keep your feet on the ground. Don’t let fear cage you in. And don’t ever, ever forget to look up.


Danyelle Leafty is writer currently producing a series entitled ‘The Fairy Godmother Dilemma’ using our Scribe’s Forge Publishers method of serial publishing. Laura and I are grateful for her permission to feature her writing here.

 

Wheelchair Cat Victim?

GRAMMAR POLICE: While the actual story is tragic … who wrote this headline for MSNBC: “Cops: Elderly couple, cat die in murder-suicide”. Was the cat a murder or suicide victim? The subheading was worse…
“An 81-year-old man shot his wheelchair-bound wife and cat, and then turned the gun on himself…” My question: What kind of person shoots a wheelchair-bound cat?

The times they are a-changin’

Kindle RevolutionI just received a royalty statement the other day from one of my publishers. It was of more than a little interest to note that ebook sales of my novel exceeded those of paperback sales. Ah, I thought, the times they are a-changin’.

Traditional advertising methods no longer work they way they once did. Google and Facebook ads are making money for Google and Facebook but their action response does not justify the expense. Even television advertising no longer has the impact that it once had and people are becoming largely ‘banner blind’ when it comes to the internet; tuning out banner ads on pages and making them mentally invisible.

Where is the audience? They are obviously still out there and still reading … but they moved and we who make our living off of the written word need to move with them. So where is the power today to get the attention of our audience and get our words read?

In an age of Big Media it is found ironically in your friendly, neighborhood website, facebook page and podcast. It is found in personal connections between you and me entering into a conversation that is personal. It is in properly conducting virtual blog tours, skype interviews with niche podcasts and in developing a personal connection with a developing audience.

I’m looking forward to our WK 5 Seminar called ‘How Are My Englush?’ It’s going to be a crammed course on the current and rapidly evolving state of publishing today and how authors need to make the leap of faith to New Media and a new way of seeing the business of their writing. It is going to turn into something of a writers ‘mad scientist’ laboratory of new ideas, approaches and commando-publishing that will get your works profitably READ by an enthusiastic audience.

Evolve or die, is my motto: as writers we either change with the times or get left behind. I hope you’ll join us for this evolution of revolution in our online Seminars.

After all, the times, they ARE a-changin’

Deep Meaning…

This rather well-read fellow believes he has discovered the ‘secret code’ behind C. S. Lewis’ ‘Chronicles of Narnia.’ After ponderous thought, long study and research, he has apparently found that C. S. Lewis’s masterpiece was founded entirely on the mythology of the planets.

May I take a moment and cast a skeptical eye on this from a writer’s perspective. Margaret Weis and I once speculated on a future time when a scholar — not unlike this well-intended fellow — would examine our ‘Dragonlance’ novels from the perspective of an astrophysicist. He might carefully plot the periods of time in the book between when the red, silver or dark moons were in evidence, extrapolate the planetary mass of Krynn and determine the precise orbits of all celestial bodies in our book. He might then congratulate both Margaret and me for our brilliance in determining the orbital characteristics of these bodies and declare that astrophysics was the foundation of our work.

The truth is that the moons came up when we thought it best for the story.

The moral of this tale — for me — is that criticisms, deconstructions and literary examinations of this kind are not that helpful unless you have access to the author and can ask him what he was thinking at the time.

Likely as not, that author’s answer will be no deeper or complex than that it seemed right for the story at the time.

Young writers are always looking for the ‘secret’ — the magic elixir, the golden chalice, the hidden knowledge — that published and well-read authors seem to keep hidden from the rest of the world. If only they had that ‘secret code’ then they, too, could be famous and well-paid for their words.

The truth is that if you are looking for the ‘secret’ — you need to stop looking, roll up your sleeves and get to work.

If you want to become a published and well-read author — you need three basic things: Talent, Craft and Discipline. This is the subject of the first seminar in our Foundations course. We give you the tools you need: the structure of story, characters, world building and the craft of writing in our curriculum here at Scribe’s Forge. Our writing seminars and workshops are designed to deal with the real foundations of story and writing that you can apply to your writing today — not abstract theories.

What do you think? Leave your comment … but please don’t ask us about the orbit of our three moons.

The Book as a Statement

Matt Lamprose — the friend of mine who pointed out that books are the ‘souvenir you keep after you’ve read the book’ and thereby formed the inception of our serial publishing — send me an article that appeared today in the New York Times. It was entitled ‘Selling a Book by its Cover’ by Peneope Green and was featured in the Home and Garden section.

The Home and Garden Section of the Time’s is interested in books?

It appears, in the article, that people actually WANT physical books as a statement in their decor.

The printed, bound book has been given a stay of execution by an unlikely source: the design community. In this Kindle-and-iPad age, architects, builders and designers are still making spaces with shelves — lots and lots of shelves — and turning to companies like Mr. Wines’s Juniper Books for help filling them.

Doomsayers have been proclaiming the death of the printed word since the rise of personal computers in the 1980′s. Does anyone remember the ‘paperless office’ concept that was supposed to save us from having filing cabinets or deal with reams of pesky printouts? What those prognosticators failed to appreciate is that people WANT the tactile connection with the information. This is at the heart of the Scribe’s Forge Publishing method: deliver the story now via the internet AND deliver the physical experience and connection at the end of the journey.

The books we keep are a statement we make about ourselves. Quoting Peter Pennoyer, a New York architect:

“A book is a meaningful, sensory experience,” he pointed out. “If we buy her all new Trollope, then she’s suddenly looking at a volume that’s foreign, that doesn’t smell right or have the typeface that’s familiar. If she doesn’t have the memory of having read the book, it’s not going to mean the same thing. My thought is to elevate all these mismatched bindings and put them in these containers, so it all looks uniform and pretty, but the client can keep the books she’s loved for decades.”

This is why books have become an integral part of the design of homes, spaces and offices. Indeed, the perceived demise of the physical book in the age of Kindles and Nooks may be contributing to the rise of peoples awareness regarding their connection with books.

As it happens, the-book-as-relic was forecasted by marketers. Ann Mack, director of trend-spotting for JWT New York, the marketing and advertising agency, noted in her trend report for the coming year that “objectifying objects,” she said, “would be a trend to watch.”

Quoting from her report, she added: “Here’s what we said: ‘The more that objects become replaced by digital virtual counterparts — from records and books to photo albums and even cash — watch for people to fetishize the physical object. Books are being turned into decorative accessories, for example, and records into art.’ ”

Ms. Mack added that she was working with a decorator to “refresh” her own Manhattan apartment, and was hoping to decorate lavishly with books. She wondered if she might stack her books and turn them into legs for a coffee table.

“Then,” she said, “I can put my Kindle on top.”

The revolution of New Media is not the death-knell of the printed word. If anything — handled properly — it may elevate its stature once again from the common to the cherished.

I can have my Kindle … and love my printed books, too.

Publishing, New Media and the Studio System

I believe that the situation publishing is facing in new media today is highly analogous to the old ‘Studio System’ that existed in Hollywood from the 1920s until its abolition through anti-trust legislation in the 1950s. During this period of time, Movie Studios (like MGM, Paramount, Fox and the like) owned the entire production and distribution chain of films. They ‘owned’ contract players (much like professional athletes today) and would trade them like property. They also put directors under contract as well, insuring that they would only work for their ‘dream factory.’ Then, to top all this off, the studios also owned their own theater chains — controlling who distributed their movies. If you wanted to see Clarke Gable’s latest movie, then you could only find it at an MGM owned theater. Or, if you were an independent theater owner and you wanted the latest Clark Gable film (blockbuster) you were required to purchase an entire slate of lesser-quality MGM movies as well. When this secure channel of distribution was challenged, it seemed for a time as if movie studios were going the way of the dodo — but then studios wised up and realized that they weren’t in the business of making movies — they were in the entertainment business and that they needed to change with the times. The result is the current reality in Hollywood where studios provide financing and facilities services to independent production companies … and everyone is making money again. No studio owns Cameron’s Lightstorm production company — but both Cameron and the studio backing him made a killing on ‘Avatar.’

Big publishers find themselves in a similar position, I believe, to that of movie studios in the 1950s. Their classic and time honored distribution system is being challenged by new media. The old models aren’t working any more. I believe that publishers will also have to change in much the same way as studios did in the 1950s and 1960s.

To this end, Laura and I are establishing Scribe’s Forge Publishing. While we hope to teach what we have learned about the craft and art of Science-fiction and Fantasy writing, we are also hoping to develop it into an ebook/new media production house. Such places, I believe, will become filters for future readers in much the same way that traditional publishing filtered out the noise from the signal. I would like people to come to Scribe’s Forge Publishing looking for our latest published author (possibly like yourself) because we develop a reputation for publishing only quality works rather than anything that is just tossed up onto the internet. By becoming a focal point of quality, more readers will be drawn to our place first rather than random searching the web, and thus serving our authors with better revenues. At least that’s the model that I think the future holds for us all.

New media? Yes, please, I’d like to be a part of that frontier!

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